Jack and Me-by Sione.

                                       Jack and me
Learning Intention-we ate learning to create a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I am successful when I can create a fairy tail story.

Once upon a time I invited jack to come to my school and play with me. I was very excited so I was waiting and waiting and waiting. But he took long. After that he finally came. Then we were playing soccer in the court.

My room mates knew him because I told them. After that we started to continue our game. after that Jack kicked it over. Then he went to go get it. But he got lost. So I went to go find him. After that I could not find him any where. So I stated to put up pictures of him that said missing. after that I was still searching for him. Then I found him in the bush. when I found him we carried on with our soccer game.